Tim marrs

I feel the subject matter of my work is very commercial. I have looked at Tim Marrs work who has done a lot of advertising. I did not feel my pieces were working. I think the key could be negative space, scale  and crop compositon. The brighter colours of my work, work well to convey the commercial aspect of the pieces but scale may be the key to making my pieces more proffesional

I need to remember that this is a sequence of images so they should all share the same format.